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To save my snow bound love. by ~flaming-hamish:iconflaming-hamish:



To save my snow bound love.

I dreamt one night a horrible dream
A nightmare so foul and dark
My one true love was buried under the snow
And I couldn’t get her out.

I rallied a team of my closest friends
To help my snow bound lover
Out into the cold we boldly stepped
To save my beautiful one

But my friends wouldn’t help
They stood around and thought it all a joke
I cried bitter tears that froze on my face
And fell to my knees in pain

As I screamed your name into the starless night
I realized you weren’t really there
Someone else had gotten you out
And taken you home to be warm

And now you watch me scream your name
In the arms of your shining knight
You smile as you see me fall to the ground
Dead, from the cold

I awoke in the morning and remembered my dream
And all the pain it held
For my dream was real
My love was gone and I was dead to the world.
©2007-2010 ~flaming-hamish
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Author's Comments

yeah sorry i couldn't make it ryme. i actually had this dream and yeah it was the worst dream i have ever had, ever. you know it's bad when ever your dreams are depressing.

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:iconthejuliatheory:
:-( that's a terrible dream.
but your poem is awesome. i love it, in a sad sort of way. :(

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rock on.*
:iconflaming-hamish:
yah the dream scarded the shit out of me.

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